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Burning Rain

Contributed by munch on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Sitting alone, crying about my past
not able to give it up.
Looking out my window
rain falling carelessly
I remember being happy.
Gazing up above, looking at the stars
tears fill my eyes, blurring my vision.
"I wonder who's up there watching over me."
Depression hits like a baseball bat.
Times like these, I wish I could leave
never come back.

Why do I have these feelings inside me?
Could death make me free?
Chills run down my spine.
I cup my hands over my face
"This is the last time."
I want to be happy.
I want to be free from this misery.
I raise my hand, gently touch the window
feeling nothing but the bitter cold dampness.
"How can the world be so peaceful?"
Trees have no feelings.

I reach for a cup, bringing it to my mouth
I swallow what's inside.
That shot of whiskey made me feel alive.
"The only solution to feeling like this, is to drink my problems away."
Pour another shot, "This will do."
Standing up, I walk towards the bed
falling ontop of the mattress I said,
"These feelings inside, will never subside, but damn I'm glad to be drunk."

Copyright © munch ... [ 2003-06-02 21:05:00]
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Re: Burning Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:09:24 AM AEST
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That was good. I feel your pain. Nice write.

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