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I will try LIFE instead
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
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No more pain, its all gone
I feel sane, somethings wrong
For the first time in my life I feel Ok
And I hope this way I can stay
Things were so bad before
Suicide I couldnt ignore
The thoughts were always there
But now I have no fear
For once Im standing tall
and I dont feel that small
Nothing in my life has changed
My prioritys Ive arranged
Instead of feeling bad for me
I look for things better to see
I used to hate my life
Untill I lost my wife
Now I want to get things staight
Before it gets to late
You see she is my everything
Without her Im no being
So I have no choice to change my ways
I'll be looking for a job that pays
My poetry is no longer first
Untill I get reimbursed
I feel as though I am great
But I suppose that it can wait
Because shes more important than my words
And to lose it all is just absurd
So I am sorry YPDC
This could be the last youve heard from me
Goodbye and farewell and the best to you all
Sooner or later I will be back
As soon as I get myself on track
But up untill then
One last goodbye to my friends
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-06-02 16:05:00]
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Re: I will try LIFE instead
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:37:02 PM AEST
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Great write I understand that other things may come first. If you feel the urge to write please put what your feelings down on paper. In the meantime I will miss reading your poems.
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Re: I will try LIFE instead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:56:28 PM AEST
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You seem to be on the right track,by acknowledging you need to move on. I wish you all the best in your endeavors! Your words will be surely missed,and I only pray you return to your poetry and your friends here. Keep on writing as you venture into the unknown,we'll be glad to read the great results you return with!!!! 0:-)
Angel always!!! Godspeed!!! joni |
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