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Counterfeit Freedom
Contributed by
wild_heart_of_fire
on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The roads that lead you home are winding
The heart that takes you there is broken
The soul that speaks to you is crying
The old wounds now begin to reopen
If all the stars fell would you still pretend to be?
If all your dreams came crashing down would you still smile at me?
And all you do is pretend to exist
All you feel is all you’ve missed.
Don’t look at me anymore
Don’t fake that smile and all it stands for
You’re just pretend
A mannequin
Forget all you’ve lost
You know the cost
You forgot how to live
You forgot how to breath
You’ve forgot everything
Including me.
Just runaway again
Pretend to be free.
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wild_heart_of_fire
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2003-06-02 07:05:00]
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Re: Counterfeit Freedom
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 03:28:52 PM AEST
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| Hey, I've read this poem a thousand times (because SOMEONE saved it on MY computer) and i still love it everytime i read it! Great write Riki, and welcome to ypdc! |
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Re: Counterfeit Freedom
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:56:06 PM AEST
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| interesting, makes one think........... |
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Re: Counterfeit Freedom
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 08:51:01 AM AEST
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| This cuts through the bull I like it, it reminded me of of things I had begun to drift off toward mannequin land, thanks for writing it. |
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Re: Counterfeit Freedom
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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i love this poem...it's awesome, i love the lines
Don’t look at me anymore
Don’t fake that smile and all it stands for
amazing... |
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