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When
Contributed by
trisha
on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When I wake up you come in mind
When I take a shower your in my thoughs
When I get dressed I see you there watching me
When I hang out with friends I feel you there
When I do something wrong your there behide me
Copyright ©
trisha
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2003-06-02 05:05:00]
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Re: When
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 09:31:48 AM AEST
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A short sentiment but well written, says alot here. Great job.
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Re: When
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 07:46:46 PM AEST
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I agree with Michelle, short yet it says so much, great write!
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Re: When
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:05:03 PM AEST
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This is short and sweet, and says exactly what you want it to say.
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