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jesus speaks out
Contributed by
Cancer
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Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
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i never got to smoke a joint
never got to kiss a girl
never got to do anything that normal kids do
i was too busy saving this world
everyone ***** about their parents
but none of your stories can top mine
my father hated me so much
that he let me be tortured and crucified
you see, my father ***** up alot
and no one much cared for him at all
so, rather than fixing his own mess
he was more than happy to let me take the fall
to prove his love for all of you
he let his son die of asphyxiation
but, if he let his own son die, for people who hate him
how well do you expect him to treat his creations
and i really wish you'd take my name off your religion
you're making me look like an ass
everytime one of you screws up in my name
everyone points at me and laughs
you people don't think much
i see that clearly now
in the way that you still kneel
before the same dead sacred cow
what was i thinking
martyring myself for you
the decent among you don't love me
only the idiots do
you preen and you posture
spouting scripture and rhyme
all the while pacified by the thought
that my kingdom is thine
well THERE IS NO KINGDOM
just death and a grave
so get off of your knees
and stop being a slave
live your life for the moment
don't waste it trying to be like me
i've been dead 2000 years
and i'm still not free
i wasted my life
for my idiot dad
who was too damned aloof
to see what a good son he had
so he sent me to die
to correct his mistakes
and i died for naught
amidst all of you apes
my father failed me
and he will fail all of you
he can't help it, he's a ***** up
it's all he knows how to do
so just go on with your lives
and forget about me
or you'll hang on a cross
and you'll suffer like me
you'll die on that cross
for your stupidity
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Cancer
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by boobies on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:54:06 AM AEST
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| that was awesome, in so many ways. |
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 08:25:21 AM AEST
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what a great poem!! I have felt like writing something like this before. You are very brave to post it as it is such a contraversial subject but I think it is great and I agree with some of the views (not all but some).
Great work!!
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 11:43:13 AM AEST
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| I can see this being bashed by many... I won't though,I'll just say I respect your beliefs even though I don't agree... still a good poem. |
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 01:25:30 PM AEST
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| Yes, This poem will be bashed by many, which is a shame, if it was a poem about loving god and jesus, it would recieve rave reviews all around. Just the same, I loved it, and whether I agree or not isn't the point. It was extremely well written and the feelings came across loud and clear. You are truly gifted!! Keep up the great work!!! |
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:15:33 PM AEST
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Roy... I must say very good and very well written although I fail to see this was a direct quote from Jesus since you stated before he never existed. In any case a well written poem even if the message is a bit skewed.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by Cancer on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 06:13:17 PM AEST
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actually, i believe i said god did not exist. i believe jesus existed, he was just a psychopath.
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:02:13 PM AEST
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| excellent. |
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by hardcoreputa on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 12:23:40 AM AEST
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| wow... overflowing with truth... an interesting view of what Jesus felt... i too don't believe in the christian god, but, that doesn't mean there weren't people who did believe in that god, and thought they were holy... there were actually many "mosiah's" at that time.. anyway great write.. lots of insight ~Apryl |
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Re: jesus speaks out
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 04:03:08 PM AEST
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PLEASE READ MY COMMENT THROUGH THE POEM I TITLED...RESPONSE TO JESUS SPEAKS OUT...
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