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I took down your picture
Contributed by
Gin
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Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I finally took down your picture today
I took your smiling face off the wall and tucked you away
No longer will your picture be a part of my room
Just like you no longer being a part of my life
I took down your picture today
I didn't fight back tears, I didn't burn that piece of worthless paper I didn't do anything
For once I didn't break down
I just shrugged my shoulders and moved on
Yes I moved on
I've had enough of the heart ache and pain
I'm tired of people playing mind games
I'm sick of feeling something that isn't real
So I took down your picture today
Copyright ©
Gin
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2003-06-02 01:05:00]
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Re: I took down your picture
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by Chuckx on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 07:36:31 AM AEST
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I still have her picture hangin' round
to take it down
would leave a hole in me
a scar to see
that I'm afraid would show
too much that I don't know
'bout what is real
that shows the hurt and ache I feel
I cannot yet
beyond regret
take down her smile
but I congratulate
your strength to graduate
beyond the wound
hopefully, I too will soon
And I'll have you to thank
but now I wouldn't bank
on me taking her down
I'm still her clown
At least I have your cue
and have the notion to
take down her smile
I needed to hear your poem this morning. Thank you. Chuckx.
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Re: I took down your picture
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 10:40:32 AM AEST
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mmm good 4 u ,for the courage and the nice poem :)
GINA |
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Re: I took down your picture
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 07:06:11 PM AEST
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... Incredible. It was ironic how I just went searching through this site for a little comfort and I ran across your poem at no better time. I just recently said goodbye, and I am still hurting over it- and I didn't stop myself from crying. And... this poem, it just really brought that smile to my face that I've needed lately.
Amazing! -Amy- |
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Re: I took down your picture
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:54:43 PM AEST
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Doesn't the picture live on in your mind though.
Still I admire the poem. Good sense for every young person |
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