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Black Roses On My Grave...
Contributed by
silent-cry
on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Don't forget to put black roses on my grave
I died the day you took back what you once gave...
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silent-cry
... [
2003-06-01 18:05:00]
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by youngpoet1989 on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 07:34:07 PM AEST
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Wow not thats a really short poem,
It looks more like a quote though,
But I like it :) |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 09:57:17 PM AEST
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This couplet could be a start of a really beautiful poem...why don't you expand on it!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 10:07:32 PM AEST
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This couplet could be a start of a really beautiful poem...why don't you expand on it!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 03:00:48 AM AEST
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A powerful message in a short space. I must agree expand this!! I will be watching for a follow up!!
Michelle |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:34:34 PM AEST
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I just sat there for a minute blinking wondering where the rest was. This can evolve into an awesome poem. Write more! |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:27:13 PM AEST
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I agree with all the others - this could make an excellent longer poem. Please try and write more!
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by xraz0rx on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:43:58 AM AEST
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i liked this alot.. keep it up
-.xMissyx.- |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by xraz0rx on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:44:04 AM AEST
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i liked this alot.. keep it up
-.xMissyx.- |
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Re: Black Roses On My Grave...
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by cant-skate on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:22:16 PM AEST
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When i stopped givin i hoped u ll take my heart for the only thing i can give ! U died while i was waitin for my death to give u the heart that u need for heaven as a Pass!
black roses with ur death turned red
from the tears i cried and blood i spawned
Took thy color and bread their lives ! |
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