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Try to Understand, Struggle to Be
Contributed by
the_callif
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2016 @ 07:57:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We all talk, we all converse
We make castles out of sand
With our words, with our voices
Try so hard to understand
Struggle against God
Struggle against Me
I felt that I could stand up
But you brought me to my knees
I was swept under the depth
But the Truth will set Me free
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the_callif
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2016-11-16 19:57:15]
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Re: Try to Understand, Struggle to Be
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by duff on
Thursday, 17th November 2016 @ 07:05:31 AM AEST
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You/'/ve got some strong lines in there and I like how you pieced them together.
"I was swept under the depth"
I like that. Awesome job
duff
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Re: Try to Understand, Struggle to Be
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 17th November 2016 @ 07:00:18 PM AEST
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The title hooked me, and I was not let down, awesome write
I think everyone is always looking for that Truth that will set them free |
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