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I'm In The Wind
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
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Today is a new day, I must wipe the tears away,
There is nothing I can do, to express my love for you,
All I have is these words, me without you that's opsurd,
But given the facts were on the verge of attack,
This may be my last poem I ever write, if they attack I'll lose my life,
Just know how much I love you, know I'll always be true,
I may be with him, but I'll be showing my love through Kim,
My memory will never fade, I'll be with you everyday,
I'll be watching you from above, sending down rays of my love,
I'll be with you while you sleep, all you have to do is believe,
Enemy jet are already in our airspace, this poem is just in case,
If I'm to go, there's things I want you to know,
Your love will never be forgotten, a touch as soft as cotten,
A kiss as sweet as morning rain, just the thought leaves me in pain,
I don't want to leave, but it's ok if it keeps Amercia free,
I'll watch you from afar, I'll be your shining star,
I know you'll cry if I'm to die,
But don't morn to long, I beg you to move on,
You have a life to live, you must raise our kids,
You'll love agan, just remember I'm in the wind.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 02:29:03 PM AEST
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| awww! your still here! you will write many many more great poems! we would ~*all*~ miss you! but matt, your almost home! ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 02:53:34 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely written...there is so much love here....I am sure there will be more...take care.... |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 03:12:01 PM AEST
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You have such a wonderful way with words I am sure God will let us keep you a little longer so we can all benifit
Shari |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 05:24:11 PM AEST
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| this is so sad and beautiful... |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by shelby on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 06:50:45 PM AEST
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| This is a tear jerker!! You got me with this one. I'll pray for your safe returns. You will be ok I know you will. God Bless You!! Wonderful poem my friend wonderful!! |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 07:16:31 PM AEST
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| Not long now ... hang in there .... such a beautifully expressed poem ... Jan |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 07:22:48 PM AEST
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Awww Matt...a tear-jerker indeed!! Hang in there...you're not going anywhre but home to your Raven....and your kids.... In the mean time,,,the wind will take your love home...
Hugs my good friend...
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 07:40:14 PM AEST
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wow, this brought a tear to my eye. You have such a wonderful way with words, i applaud you. Don't worry, my friend, you'll make it home to your kids soon, and God bless!
Your fan,
Lisa |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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| AAWW So touching I can understand your thinking this way being in the Army & fighting for our country! You truly have alot of guts & glory! I know God will bring you home to your family safe & sound,theres many prayers going out to you here! GOD BLESS! Christina |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by venkat on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 02:26:18 AM AEST
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| Very touching..very beautiful..so.. forever faithful.. bye.. venkat |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:38:20 PM AEST
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Thank you ladyfawn, if not for your kind words, I don't think I'd be me. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:39:41 PM AEST
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Thank you sexygirl, for your kind words, though I don't know if I've earned them.
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:42:42 PM AEST
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Thank you so much Shari, your such a great person. Your words are so kind and heartfelt. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:44:13 PM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words. Thank you.
The Phantom |
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Re: I'm In The Wind
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:45:48 PM AEST
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I'm sorry if this was a tear jerker, I just write from my heart, thank you for your kind words.
The Phantom |
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