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Let her be

Contributed by CarrieLynn on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I see the pain inside you
let th tortures go through
If not released soon enough
She will surpase all that is us
Forget her face and heart
And let our love from here on start
She is a burden to your soul
with our love again youll be whole
Life has more to offer in your years
So go on bring on the shame and tears
I will be your shoulder to cry on
And I will wait till the damage is done
I will always be near
Being alone should never be a fear
I wont leave your side
And never faulter or lie
I believe having hope and faith
So when your relationship starts to cave
I am the one who will break the fall
I can be your everything, your all
Dont mess with things you dont need
My mind and soul your feelings feed
Things soon have to be changed
The setting is perfectly arranged
Lets leave in harmony
While the time is plenty
Our souls hearts and minds as one
For all the pain is amounting to tons
Guts, love and glory will carry us through
And for all my work all I want is you.

Copyright © CarrieLynn ... [ 2003-06-01 06:05:00]
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Re: Let her be (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 06:45:21 AM AEST
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damn that is beautifull

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