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Is There Anyone Who Cares To Try and Save This Life
Contributed by
Stalkee
on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Whenever I look at the sunset now,
when night is coming, my head is filled with thoughts of you
Baby, darling, angel, I know you don't care
About any of these feelings that I feel
And I'm sure everyone's tired of listening to me
Telling them how nothing ever works out in my life
So just hand me those pills over there
Then you won't have to hear me anymore
I've gone a little crazy lately
My souls bleeding and my mind is on death
Is there anyone who cares to try and save this life?
I almost thought that my life would get better
Now it seems life is just out to get me
Well my life is just like a bird
And like a bird I'm ready to fly away forever
I've always enjoyed all the passing hours
Of night time showers and the darkness filling my whole room
And thinking about how everyone said "get away from me,
you are just a strange and quiet boy"
Well now its around midnight and damn it,
I'm ready to end this life
Its done nothing to help me want to live
Its been just like a razor and sliced me time after time
Well now I have the slip noose hanging
From the corner of this room
Is there anyone who cares to try and save this life?
I almost thought that my life would get better
Now it seems life is just out to get me
Well my life is just like a bird
And like a bird I'm ready to fly away forever
Copyright ©
Stalkee
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2003-05-31 16:35:00]
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Re: Is There Anyone Who Cares To Try and Save This Life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:48:31 PM AEST
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I care! And though life has its desperate moments,no matter how unbearable, a kind word can always make the difference.You are accepted here through the sharing of your poetry.So life does have a purpose for you!
I look forward to reading MORE of your poetry!
{{{{Stalkee}}}}}
Angel always...Godspeed...my poet friend!0:-)
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Re: Is There Anyone Who Cares To Try and Save This Life
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:03:51 PM AEST
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no! no! no! you are such a dear precious beautiful soul! i care very much about you! ack! time for a long soak in the tub and some scented candles, am sending a ~:*huge warm hug*:~ and want for you to know you are deeply cared about and loved by many, i am here for you anytime, please write or pm me, love nessa
oldengmastiff@hotmail.com {im on msn now} i will always answer you:) |
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Re: Is There Anyone Who Cares To Try and Save This Life
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:06:57 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so sad...and i care, i really do, and i hate seeing people in this much pain because i know how much it hurts...please don't give up, not yet...if you ever need to talk or need someone just to listen then i will...please...it's not worth it... |
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Re: Is There Anyone Who Cares To Try and Save This Life
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 11:45:19 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. I have tried pills razors and a few other things. But it is an permanent answer to a temperarary solution. This is what i think when my world crashes "There is someone else who has it a little worse than me today"
Always
Amy |
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Re: Is There Anyone Who Cares To Try and Save This Life
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by SpreadYourWings on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 01:54:40 AM AEST
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| I too feel this way too frequently than I want. Being a teenager these days is a lot more difficult then one had predicted. Lest i'll ask, were you influenced by a particular song to write this poem? |
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