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Keep me here forever
Contributed by
knowWhat_kind
on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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While lying next to your body
your arms wrapped around me
for just a second I would not trade anything more
your brave touch wandering towards my body
I could never feel so alive in loves sweet embrace
should I tell you what I feel
could we stay here all night
I love you I always will please say to me
the things your ingenuous mind never thought to be real
Could one ever be held in such fascinating grace
Should our bodies look like we are in sin for we are not
We are just a little portion of what will actually happen to our generation
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Re: Keep me here forever
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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| really captures the moment, heart to heart, lovely poem:) ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Keep me here forever
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:37:18 PM AEST
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This had a nice feel to it. Prose is a difficult form to convey,but you did it nicely.Keep up the good work.
Angel always...Godspeed...joni |
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Re: Keep me here forever
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:47:41 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so beautiful... |
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Re: Keep me here forever
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 03:20:59 PM AEST
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| I liked this...you have written this so well.... |
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Re: Keep me here forever
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:18:36 PM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE...i loved the last line... |
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Re: Keep me here forever
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 01:09:49 AM AEST
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good peom, well written.
ShadowsCloud |
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