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Six Feet Below
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Monday, 16th May 2016 @ 09:30:32 AM in AEST
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Oh it/'/s you
I guess you found what you were
Looking for
Yeah it/'/s me from the underside
Don/'/t kid yourself
And wonder why
You look so pretty
From way down below
Maybe you/'/re wondering
How would I know
These eyes still see
From six feet below
Did you bring your friend
To see the show
I hope he doesn/'/t know
The plans you have for him
Way down below
Someday you/'/ll cross the divide
We/'/ll meet again on the
Underside
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2016-05-16 09:30:32]
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by softerware on
Monday, 16th May 2016 @ 02:06:35 PM AEST
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Haunting! A spooky little warning to beware!
Your last sentence stays with me: well meet again on the Underside...
and the fact that you chose to capitalize it gives it credibility! Yikes!
James..you are a man to be reckoned with! I will cut you a wide path!
Woe to those who trifle with the watchers!
softerware |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 16th May 2016 @ 11:47:45 PM AEST
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Thats right
let em know you are watching
and
waiting...... |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th May 2016 @ 05:30:34 AM AEST
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| Watching and threatening from the underside. This gets more spooky each time I read it. |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 18th May 2016 @ 07:51:05 AM AEST
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Yikes! Go git /'/em, tiger!
I love it!
Mike |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 18th May 2016 @ 11:09:42 AM AEST
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Smirk inducing excellence! Love it.
~Scorp |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th May 2016 @ 10:55:32 PM AEST
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| wicked awesome! hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by FireStarter on
Thursday, 9th June 2016 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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| Spooky and I loved the flow :) awesome |
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Re: Six Feet Below
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2020 @ 09:19:21 AM AEST
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//See? I // knew// you were too good to be true. Now I gotta run from you too? Oi!!!
Just kidding...maybe. Perhaps I shouldn`t go to any cemeteries with you though.
Thank you,
Dugan
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