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Fate
Contributed by
kizzikins
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Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 11:59:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fate pulls us together,
fate pulls us apart
but fate was always by our side
it was right from the start.
Fate told us to be cautious
it told us to be kind
to keep first impressions to ourselves
and keep an open mind
To keep a bond between us
that would last so very long
to never push eachother away
and admit when we were wrong
But, fate teases and taunts us
Fate lies and diseves
Fate laughs at our misery
and makes us beg apon our knees
Fate told us to be angry
when nothing had gone wrong
it kept us mad at eachother
for weeks or months to long
It brought us cheaters and liers
to twist around our words
to tell us things that were never said
which some may find ubsurd
Still,Fate brought us together
and fate pulled us apart
but in the end we found eachother again
we found a whole new start
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Re: Fate
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by Sweetie on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:03:56 PM AEST
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Oh wow I really really love this poem it's very well written and very good!! Keep up the food work!
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Re: Fate
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by Sweetie on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:04:34 PM AEST
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I mean the good work lol!
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Re: Fate
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:34:08 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is really a great poem. Kizzikins. It truly says a lot...and so well written.
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Re: Fate
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:08:11 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem you have written hear...don't know why but it gave me goosebumps...hope to read more of your work...
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Re: Fate
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by Lia on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:49:03 AM AEST
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| This is marvelous!! Fate plays such a huge role in everyday life..ppl just don't realize it half the time. I love this! |
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