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I Am Coming......
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Sunday, 24th April 2016 @ 11:30:24 AM in AEST
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The first time I met them
I knew I had to leave em alone
they fed off pain and anger
loving life when everything is going wrong,
so I stayed in the shadows
trying not to make a sound
but still they came at me
mentally breaking me down,
They
were laughing and giggling
sticking the knife in
living off the pain I was feeling
thinking I was broken,
what they did not know
I do not break
although I may bend
and I have had enough
now it is time for revenge.
we all know the feeling
of staying awake at night
moaning from the emotional torture
that they use to mess up life,
I am gonna get them for all the times
they messed with peoples minds
spreading their disease
using Illusions as they distort with lies,
I can see their faces slowly cracking
as they realize somethings wrong
they can run
but
they can not hide
I will not let them abuse me anymore,
I am coming...
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Re: I Am Coming......
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 24th April 2016 @ 06:16:29 PM AEST
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It wasn/'/t me!
Just kidding. I know what you mean, I think.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: I Am Coming......
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 25th April 2016 @ 10:38:49 AM AEST
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Great poem with "the flow"
The poem was great and the first stanza brilliant!
James |
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Re: I Am Coming......
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th April 2016 @ 01:11:03 PM AEST
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| Go get those imps! |
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Re: I Am Coming......
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 26th April 2016 @ 03:52:12 PM AEST
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great! go get /'/em! wonderful powerful message!
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: I Am Coming......
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 26th April 2016 @ 11:20:23 PM AEST
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Oh let us no longer be victims! A great, necessary, long long overdue message! So wonderfully prepared as you dress to do battle!
I will be re reading this to summon my will to win another day!
Wonderful, entertaining and best of all...inspiring!
Bravo!
softerware |
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