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Dreaming of the end
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Friday, 22nd April 2016 @ 11:43:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Last night I had an interesting dream.
Life was not at all what it seemed
Mountains crumbled and fell at my feet
As I hung my head low in defeat
The sky withered and grew as dark as night
Thunder rumbled, lightning lit up the sky
The rain started to pour in mountainous heaps
A shiver ran down my spine, it gave me the creeps
The ground began to shake and growl from within
Everyone began running; women, children and men
And just as I started screaming for dear life
I woke up from my dream and all of its strife.
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Re: Dreaming of the end
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 03:04:25 AM AEST
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Thats that deep inner vision messing with you
oh and I know the feeling,
thanx for sharing..... |
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Re: Dreaming of the end
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 08:13:24 AM AEST
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| Armageddon is an intrinsic dream-scenario. I doubt there/'/s many who have not shared such a dream, at some point in their lives. |
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Re: Dreaming of the end
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd April 2016 @ 05:21:00 PM AEST
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i hate when that happens, dreams can be so real...... excellent poem:)
hugs n love nessa |
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Re: Dreaming of the end
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by duff on
Sunday, 24th April 2016 @ 05:59:43 PM AEST
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You/'/ve got great imagery and a nice rhythm throughout. Great job.
duff |
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