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Revenge
Contributed by
disposable_teen
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Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
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You ain't ever gonna walk my way
Cos' I know that you've never liked me anyway,so don't stay
I wouldn't notice cos' I't ain't no loss
all you ever did was cheat on me and double cross
I won't be satisfied until you're gone
but I still want to know what is going on
You know that I've tried but I'm losing my hope
I can't cope cos' you're tripping and you're slipping like a soap on a rope
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Re: Revenge
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by crossmyheartwithaknife on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 02:05:01 AM AEST
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| very good. ive kinda felt this way before. |
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Re: Revenge
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by disposable_teen on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 02:39:27 AM AEST
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| hey people this is my last poem ive got to write coz i amtemping u no wat ok bye |
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Re: Revenge
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by boobies on
Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 04:48:36 AM AEST
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| wow you flow great. your rhymes aren't forced, that's great too. i hope you're not attempting what I THINK. no nonononononooononono. write more, please. |
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Re: Revenge
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:30:19 PM AEST
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Keep your talent alive with the way you create your feelings thru your words, others can also relate and help themsleves and you, if you only listen to them on here. No life in the world is worth giving your life up on, for the love of a woman or man. Meaning, when you get burnt, hurt, you live it, cry it, get angry and in a case where you have a talent to write, then vent it out in feelings thru your words. Your life is much more precious then the one you say you love and willing to die for, because they are not there. Then they were not the one to love you, just possibly being a friend is what she might have all she was cabable of being. Love is very powerful and takes on a life of its own. Be strong, vent your hurt and anger out with your writing instrument, learn from it, and listen to those who have also gone thru and still are going thru the love pain and pain of being lonely, thier lives have been enriched by being here and getting thru a time that may not have seemed like the end of the world for them. You can get thru this, as others have, just let them do so. Read what they have to say about their ways of pain and anger, and how they have coped. Remember, your life is more important then some one who didn't love you the way you wanted them to. YOu have a precious gift to write, then do so, and when a young gal comes along and truely sincerely will like you and what you stand for, and your love of writing. She will care about you, not what you drive, eat, drink, how you dress, or anythintg else material. She will like you, for you. so live it up now, and write those feelings down, it will help as well as you in time accepting you for who you are,and you are a human to live a life you choose, so don't choose to pine on a gal who wasn't worth your time. YOu have better things in life to do. Write down how you feel and hoping you heal and in time move on. IF I seem so straight forward, its because I lived it too, although I'm much older, Its experience that says this, and it may appear to be the end of the world, for you, but really , you are just learning about you and some things in life as you do heal and move on in it. I say it like it is, and reality is a factor, so don't think of ending life now, just because you feel a gal is not there to love you, its because she wasn't worth YOUR time, my dear. ON HERE YOU ARE WORTH THe time,so get to living and be that young fine gent I know you are, and get a move on in what teens do today, have fun enjoy it, because teen life is difficult and fun, and so much experiences in this time to remember later on the road, when you can laugh, think about, DAng it, why in blazes, did I ever do that for, or that girl wasn't worth it, she was using me all along. Just something for you to think about.... You got Now to live, so live it............ :)
AMber Rose :)
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Re: Revenge
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:08:23 AM AEST
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Hey i know what it is like to be burnt!
Always
Amy |
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