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the voice of the whirlwind
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2016 @ 11:58:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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we are not alone
ripple and witness
yourself
slide your pen
across those pages
break
open spill out
the collective spin
finish LOUD
unlock ease the clench
freefalling into the arms
of catch and hold
I am, you are, we can.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2016-04-06 11:58:46]
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Re: the voice of the whirlwind
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 7th April 2016 @ 03:59:21 PM AEST
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Thanks for the ride.
Invierno |
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Re: the voice of the whirlwind
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by duff on
Friday, 8th April 2016 @ 12:02:50 AM AEST
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| I really like how this is punctual and to the point. Always intricate. Gets the juices flowing. It/'/s a style outside the norm. |
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Re: the voice of the whirlwind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th April 2016 @ 12:50:38 PM AEST
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| Freedom and complete trust, in the sense of being literally free, are all we need here. Comments are , with the greatest respect: futile. Self- expression, in whichever state we find ourselves, is paramount. |
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Re: the voice of the whirlwind
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by elle on
Sunday, 10th April 2016 @ 06:52:57 PM AEST
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Wow! You know, I love that!
Cheers |
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