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50 words 4 army dreamers
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alicewhite
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Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 06:56:22 PM in AEST
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taking down soldier/'/s in the heat of the afternoon sun, little boy runaway shot down shooting a gun,thought he/'/d join the army with his friend to have some fun, at least he shall not cry no more at night when he misses his mum, never get to hear his dad say "im so proud of you son" row your boat so gently down the stream till dreams are none you should have chose to shoot for the stars instead of chosing to shoot with a gun to win a war when a war cant be won,tic tac toe war games showed us so lasts words ever let me hear your 50 words for no
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Re: 50 words 4 army dreamers
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 08:49:36 PM AEST
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Few men go to war because they have too, and guitars are so much cheaper than a bullet in the head. When was the last time a woman was conscripted the death?
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Re: 50 words 4 army dreamers
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by ming on
Wednesday, 6th April 2016 @ 12:11:21 PM AEST
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Sadness pulls at me reading of this senseless death. May the stars shine brighter for the next searching soul..
Great expression here.
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Re: 50 words 4 army dreamers
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 6th April 2016 @ 02:33:53 PM AEST
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Very sad but the reality of life. More so today than ever. Great write and something different from you... This can be a cruel world and this hits home with me for sure.
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Re: 50 words 4 army dreamers
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 21st October 2016 @ 05:46:41 PM AEST
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| Kate bush was my inspiration for this one /'/ I loved her song army dreamers as a child and more recently her track featuring Steven fry 50 words for snow which is the title of the album. I think she is a genius and as she said in a earlier track Them heavy people hit me in the soft spot /'/ likewise she hit me .x |
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