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Muddied Steps
Contributed by
Invierno
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 10:06:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I/'/ve tromped for years in your muddied steps
wiping grime from my soul
to put the sun back-
the wear is showing and all my scrapings
of graveled interaction is taking
what few soul lines remain,
erasing
that new shoe smell for the
reek of and crease of loss and pain.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-04-05 10:06:28]
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Re: Muddied Steps
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 10:22:31 AM AEST
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| Nice to be back and afforded such quality. Yep, the end of the line is just a new, or should I say, an old beginning. Some things, as you say, can never be ended. |
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Re: Muddied Steps
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 01:31:17 PM AEST
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what a unique way
of looking at a trouble relationship.
yet many just won/'/t leave.
very nice original poem |
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Re: Muddied Steps
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by alicewhite on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 07:59:05 PM AEST
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| i read this three times to soak up the message and the comments reiterated sentiments of your great insghtful but to me also personally eerie unsettling poem,as for me it seems reality re enacted this scene you create for me on good friday that was more like bad friday felt like i was being crucified your writing skills seem out of this world and i for one love to be taken on the jouney with u to wherever your poetic visions take me ,uncomfortably good x |
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Re: Muddied Steps
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 6th April 2016 @ 06:45:57 AM AEST
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Hmmm... When I read the description I thought trouble with struggles in your home, but only because that/'/s the first place //relationship// takes me. However, afterwards I/'/m thinking I got an idea of it. I also like the first two lines of the second stanza. How often do you recall looking underneath your shoes at the soles, only to think a little disappointedly, //"This is too soon!"//
Perhaps a message will be in order. I/'/ll pm you. |
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Re: Muddied Steps
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by Flex4life13 on
Monday, 11th April 2016 @ 06:26:31 PM AEST
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| Very powerful and unique wordplay, love it! |
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Re: Muddied Steps
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 20th April 2016 @ 04:13:53 PM AEST
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It takes a lot to get to that point but when you do it/'/s final very well written and put my brother. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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