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Unexpected Turn of Events
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2016 @ 07:35:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Along a stretch of line,
At the juncture of a square
There was a suntrack,
Free of any care
One sense was always running,
But went not anywhere
There was a shape familiar,
When that oft/'/ acquired wasn/'/t there
Cassette, fabric, and a "game" to play
Though the game, were, dare one say unfair
The victor, had, relished in his fun,
The loser? Satisfaction bore him no throne or chair
An offering of "food",
Though the taste was of raunchy pair
Acrid, salty, unpleasant;
Combined with shame to bear
But to speak of it,
All too many will seldom dare...
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xHeathenx
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2016-04-03 07:35:51]
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Re: Unexpected Turn of Events
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 3rd April 2016 @ 08:52:34 AM AEST
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Great poem. I got it as well although what spoke to me may not be what it/'/s about. Maybe about
"eating crow" ????????
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Re: Unexpected Turn of Events
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 11:04:50 AM AEST
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| Abstract it is, and that leaves the reader a free shot at interpretation. I reads so well to me. The words are elegant and profound, and it feeds me with /'/betrayal/'/. But that/'/s just me. |
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Re: Unexpected Turn of Events
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 22nd April 2016 @ 07:36:39 PM AEST
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| eating crow ?ruby alice silver eyes like my green shine too he has stolen my daughter he is cruel can anyone help me please i shall be greatful to all those who can and who do?????? |
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Re: Unexpected Turn of Events
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 24th April 2016 @ 02:11:11 PM AEST
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The only interpretation I got while reading this was an abuse of trust and it made me think of someone being molested. I would love to be wrong, and I sincerely hope I am.
Glad you wrote this out, regardless of the content.
Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp
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