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Three Golden Rules
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Thursday, 3rd March 2016 @ 02:25:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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To live a life, most unkempt;
The biggest seed, to your contempt
Gluttony for misery- Gluttony for pain;
This is the tributary for your disdain
To carry encumbering loads of guilt;
Meanders your soul, with tears you/'/ll /'/ve spilt
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Re: Three Golden Rules
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 4th March 2016 @ 09:34:29 PM AEST
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Well thank you for offering the reader three golden rules, and not three golden showers.
I think you should consider putting this poem on next year/'/s Christmas card... Of course I/'/m kidding, but I might personally get a kick out of a card like that in amongst all the cheer... There is a good message here, so excuse my sometimes warped sense of humour.
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Re: Three Golden Rules
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 5th March 2016 @ 09:27:35 AM AEST
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A very interesting insightful poem.
Well done.
James |
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Re: Three Golden Rules
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 10th March 2016 @ 07:03:18 AM AEST
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Well done, Mark.
Invierno |
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