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The Sun, The Moon, Us…All fine.
Contributed by
Invierno
on
Saturday, 27th February 2016 @ 02:41:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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No instruction handed out with the crying,
slipped as we are /'/tween slivered dream
of feathered lids and graveled clawing.
Dawn/'/s baby teeth nipping infant chill,
new born marrow crawling in duty- bones to fill
whilst/'/ synapsed sparks command in toil,
speechless snippet/'/s whip waltzing on baton/'/s
cranial glimmers, astounding!
every life second
a Beethoven rampant in our private hall,
our booked soliloquy- our calcium amphitheater
roundly writhing /'/neath it all alone-
oh, such a bloody, bloody row!
A seashore/'/s cells, a misty moor, a tugged lunar show,
hovering then or now- pulsing blueness to and fro-
in fever to flood just under skin; nonchalant beating blood
below hairy fleshy ice of black, yellow, red, white-
this sluggish blue /'/neath pigment parchment hisses bubbles-
when our dermis falls to liquid breaches greeting magic air-
a rip, a war, a fall, a tear, a scrape-
then blue...now red!
/'/Tis flow be dirge or dearth-
spot or splash- spare or rash all day;
rampant or held at bay all, all the same.
A moon still white- A sun still bright
without percept in aerial tempo step,
a glimmer dimming, some marrow/'/s crawling ceased-
all the same all the time;
a life-death fabric wrinkled smooth and back again-
the sun, the moon, us…all fine.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-02-27 02:41:47]
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Re: The Sun, The Moon, Us…All fine.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th February 2016 @ 02:48:06 AM AEST
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// Very // nice to read. Just flowed right through the ol/'/ cranium.
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Re: The Sun, The Moon, Us…All fine.
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by ming on
Sunday, 28th February 2016 @ 01:51:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Welcome back/home. :)
ming |
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Re: The Sun, The Moon, Us…All fine.
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 28th February 2016 @ 07:13:11 PM AEST
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My God Michael, you have done it again to me!!!!! Left me in awe of another masterpiece. Perfection, Amazing and beautiful
thank you dear poet!
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Re: The Sun, The Moon, Us…All fine.
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by softerware on
Monday, 29th February 2016 @ 09:54:04 AM AEST
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Wow. Slowed me down to re-read and think upon your words. So many wonderful phrases and descriptions to consider and embrace. This is dense with expression; no fluff!
As espresso to coffee!
It bears sipping slowly to savor the nuances! It is well worth sharing with a friend!
softerware
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Re: The Sun, The Moon, Us…All fine.
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 29th February 2016 @ 01:46:37 PM AEST
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Softerware stole my thoughts. A true masterpiece indeed. Most people/'/s vocabularies are not that deep in depth. Mine included.
James |
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