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Unfinished--work in progress
Contributed by
NikaShortyyCakeFolsom
on
Saturday, 20th February 2016 @ 08:05:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Some times I just sit here and fight my fears
Quite often Im holding back tears
Im not okay,
Im not alright.
My mind is not a pretty sight.
At times I feel hollow
Emotions are way too hard to swallow
Im stubborn, so I rarely ask for help
At least not for myself.
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NikaShortyyCakeFolsom
... [
2016-02-20 20:05:47]
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Re: Unfinished--work in progress
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st February 2016 @ 12:30:36 AM AEST
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I find myself asking for help
all the time these days
Too much I think
I never did that before
Just what do all these things mean
I think when I read a poem
written free
just as it may seems
to be
that makes a mark
knowing it could go/
in any direction - that
it possibly ---
would not
NkiaShortyCakeFolsom
I think you should write more
I do hope that you do, because
you have a genuine voice
that makes good --- unfinished
Peace!
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Re: Unfinished--work in progress
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st February 2016 @ 12:33:27 AM AEST
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testing testing, so if you and a contraction
or a it don/'/t match.
testing Im testing
I/'/m this or possibly that
forward slash/// my old friend I know you work |
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