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comfort in the shadows
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 16th February 2016 @ 07:29:07 PM in AEST
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abstract
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and about
me getting
strange
the great
bells counting
the hours
wind blowing
through
like rain
in the dark
with the ghost
of a whimpering
heart and distorted
language and
charms dropping
out of once
hidden seams
as my stillness
so complete
it opens
as I close
down.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2016-02-16 19:29:07]
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Re: comfort in the shadows
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by Spike on
Friday, 19th February 2016 @ 06:06:45 PM AEST
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A post that makes one stop and ponder the steady falling away of things...
as MM sang, we all grow old and lose our charms in the end - hope you kept your diamonds! |
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Re: comfort in the shadows
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by Odessa19 on
Wednesday, 24th February 2016 @ 12:36:11 AM AEST
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But I/'/m not sad . . . because it is so charming.
Captivating! |
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Re: comfort in the shadows
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 1st March 2016 @ 11:18:39 PM AEST
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Powerful. Powerful.
invierno |
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