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Life so Shallow
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Thursday, 4th February 2016 @ 09:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You live your life so shallow
Inside of a shadow
Taking more than you can see
It burns a hole inside me
While in a daze
Within a haze
I cry out
A silent shout
cause there can be no audible pain
In a world of your reign
No love will come
In this world so numb
And happiness won/'/t shine
In darkness so devine
So only will time tell
If we will ever escape this hell
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lonelywolf04
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2016-02-04 21:25:48]
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Re: Life so Shallow
(User Rating: 1 )
by thomasu01 on
Saturday, 6th February 2016 @ 11:20:44 AM AEST
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Nice write.
from dark to bright. |
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Re: Life so Shallow
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 7th February 2016 @ 07:55:18 AM AEST
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Rarely a poem like this arrives
To glitter like pure gold and silver
I appreciate the poet truly happily
For having written a perfect gem
In limited words forming a rhyme
Is a wonderful art indeed I feel
The poet shines like the Sun
Though the subject is dark.
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