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Welcome You
Contributed by
littalmiss
on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2016 @ 08:27:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You have become a part of my life
The part I have been dreaming of
Many times I prayed for you
But was not quite prepared for the reality
You slipped through my defences
And dodged my thorns
To the rose petals surrounding my heart
That welcomes you
Your sincerity and thoughtfulness
Are new to me
When you touch me that way
So gentle as if I will break
I melt and all I want is to let go
I want to jump off the edge
Of caution & breath
I didn///'///t think someone like you existed
Outside of my hopes and desires
But here you are standing in front of me
You///'///re holding my hand
And while I was not looking
You touched my heart
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littalmiss
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2016-02-03 20:27:54]
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Re: Welcome You
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 4th February 2016 @ 03:00:27 AM AEST
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That is an amazing piece! Much different style than me, but it is full of meaning and brings the reader to feel and understand what you/'/re saying. You also have a way with words. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to seeing more from you soon.
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Re: Welcome You
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by thomasu01 on
Thursday, 4th February 2016 @ 07:19:08 AM AEST
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Very nicely penned, So sweet and wonderful. I can relate but it has been a fling and it died away, still burns but not with desire.
The flame is there but I don/'/t dare go there. |
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