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The Door Of Winter's Night
Contributed by
Invierno
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Sunday, 24th January 2016 @ 05:27:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Leaves are drifting softly,
floating on the wind;
with a flutter and a sigh,
Mother takes them in.
Through pardon of captivity,
from bonds that hold them tight,
leaves sing the song of color
to the door of Winter/'/s night.
When bastions rising from the earth
let loose their cloak of gold,
the seeds of life that sprang from death
are protected by their fold.
Through frozen season pure
living still the slow pulsed life,
the tender seeds of yesterday
battle Winter/'/s strife.
Yet with the brethren of themselves
protecting, holding safe,
the piercing cold cannot be sown
into the living breathing space.
With the elixir of the warming sun
comes the kiss of Her rebirth;
life, death, renewal,
such is the way of Mother Earth.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2016-01-24 17:27:05]
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Re: The Door Of Winter's Night
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 25th January 2016 @ 01:28:47 PM AEST
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Great earthly poem.
This is in my top 10 of yours.
I really like this. Well done indeed.
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Re: The Door Of Winter's Night
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by ming on
Tuesday, 26th January 2016 @ 12:32:29 PM AEST
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This is lovely. A beautiful write that made me sigh in gratitude. Love so so much.
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Re: The Door Of Winter's Night
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 27th January 2016 @ 04:50:55 PM AEST
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem!
The language you used is eloquent.
This wonderfully describes the cycle of life and death on mother earth.
Thank you for sharing this with us all.
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Re: The Door Of Winter's Night
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 28th January 2016 @ 10:57:17 AM AEST
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Kool flow
great topic,
well done. |
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Re: The Door Of Winter's Night
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by softerware on
Monday, 22nd February 2016 @ 11:09:04 PM AEST
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A story of all living things, disguised as a cycle of natures greenery.
We are all "tender seeds of yesterday" battling Winter/'/s strife.
Renewal comes at the expense of releasing our hold on life, "through pardon of captivity" from bonds that hold us tight.
It is a sweet song of surrender and promise.
How beautiful the soul who embraces existence this way.
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Re: The Door Of Winter's Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2016 @ 03:02:04 AM AEST
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| //I //really// like this. So flowing, so observant, so true! |
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