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HOPE
Contributed by
MUMPA
on
Sunday, 24th January 2016 @ 04:39:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I hope
We hope
Hope is a window to the will of doing something good.
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MUMPA
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2016-01-24 04:39:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: HOPE
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 24th January 2016 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST (User
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Oh, a haiku will be 5/7/5 in syllables. So this isn/'/t technically a haiku.
This would be a haiku structure
I hope, and We hope
A window to the will to
Doing something good
But I do like the idea of this. I reccommend going to the edit request page, you can either replace this with a haiku, or remove this and reupload the same title as even a different poem, or even just edit the type of poem.
Also hope may be the window to the will, but what we really need to do might just be to learn how to open it... Or use the door. Lol |
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