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Insanity
Contributed by
kippa
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Thursday, 14th January 2016 @ 01:33:04 PM in AEST
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“Why have you forsaken me
To the damned pit below?”
Deep within his body
Lays a forgotten soul
“The screams
The torture of this dreadful home!”
He shouts to himself,
For he is all alone
Insanity takes over
As he takes his last breath
He ushers his last words
“…Am I free yet?...”
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kippa
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2016-01-14 13:33:04]
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Re: Insanity
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 14th January 2016 @ 03:01:01 PM AEST
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welcome to ypdc, captivating and excellent first post:)
hugs n/'/ love nessa |
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Re: Insanity
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by Waynster on
Friday, 15th January 2016 @ 03:36:09 AM AEST
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Very nice. I just wrote a poem before I even read this and it/'/s amazing how our poems speak of nearly the same thing!
Awesome write, keep it up.
Wayne |
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Re: Insanity
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th January 2016 @ 12:11:59 AM AEST
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well done!
this trying to escape normal people
might not know. Well, then again, many, well, they just might.
To finally escape to be set free, and know that it/'/s true!
Peace! |
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