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Solace and Insight
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 10:22:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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I was lost in deep thought, wishes
Pining for the love of one that wasn/'/t mine
Everyday I/'/d think of him and yearn for his affections
Knowing full well that my desires were not reality
Frustration and guilt started to kick in
I shed a tear from time to time
Aware that my destiny was put on hold because of him
I wanted to hold him and forget him all in the same moment
Then that moment grew lighter as my mind found hope
Picturing him setting me free, giving me the comfort I needed
I ran to him for solace and insight
He held me in his arms, caressing my curly brunette locks
Then He said, don/'/t cry, for I am not worth your precious tears
I am flawed even though you see me as flawless
You want to give me the world, but the world has already found me
Your mind and heart are set on me, but I am set on other things
So go ahead and let me go for there is one that will satisfy you
He will love you and live for you, fulfill the desires in your heart
Once he/'/s yours you/'/ll forget anyone else that could come between
That unbreakable bond of genuine, eternal love
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2016-01-02 22:22:20]
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Re: Solace and Insight
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by RyanEarehart on
Sunday, 3rd January 2016 @ 03:54:28 AM AEST
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I wasnt sure how this poem was to be perceived at first but then i started to understand it.
If you love something, let it go they say.
Pretty well captured the emotion here.
Very nice. |
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Re: Solace and Insight
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 3rd January 2016 @ 01:43:05 PM AEST
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deidra,
what a lovely poem. I still miss my ex boyfriend and reminisce of times past. How beautifully you touch on God/'/s love filling our hearts desire more than anyone can. |
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Re: Solace and Insight
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 17th April 2016 @ 05:05:50 PM AEST
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| truth and beauty, hugs n love nessa |
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