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Into the abyss
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 03:27:53 PM in AEST
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When everything comes crashing down
I/'/ll be here, not willing to drown
Floating in a sea of darkness
Silently drifting into the abyss
My heart will be heavy filled with hope
Stagnant with no where to go
Sitting there waiting to explode
Waiting impatiently with no where to go
The hope has begun to die
Its withering cause/'/ it had not yet flied
Hope turns to dust in the cold abyss
I/'/m left all alone feelin/'/ the loneliness
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2016-01-02 15:27:53]
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Re: Into the abyss
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 06:42:12 PM AEST
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And there will be other days my friend. This poem, however, is certainly something I feel at times.
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Re: Into the abyss
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by ThanhThanh on
Sunday, 3rd January 2016 @ 10:15:44 PM AEST
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| Anyhow, the author is not willing to drown. |
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Re: Into the abyss
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 4th January 2016 @ 06:45:25 PM AEST
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Well written, I could feel your message here.
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