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Compartmentalease
Contributed by
spike
on
Sunday, 20th December 2015 @ 02:46:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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socks in their drawer,
clothes in their place
like the range of expressions
arranged on your face
afternoon sex,
evening for sleep
friends just to visit,
the tides high or neap
chaos for others,
routines are wise
only the foolish
would so improvise
nothing bleeds over,
all to its place
each perfect sphere
in singular grace
lovers discarded,
or leave otherwise
not fit or willing, to
compartmentalise
memories recorded,
each in their place
like the pattern of tears
arranged on your face.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2015-12-20 02:46:37]
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Re: Compartmentalease
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by irisblue on
Sunday, 20th December 2015 @ 12:44:10 PM AEST
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Spike,
this is really really good. each verse has so much meaning and depth! Great flow and great write. I still think of a love I lost a year or two back......
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Re: Compartmentalease
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2015 @ 08:30:19 AM AEST
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Love is powerful. This captures that. I mean, I think of love I never had. It has its grips on me. I enjoyed reading this.
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Re: Compartmentalease
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 24th December 2015 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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| Love the way this flowed |
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Re: Compartmentalease
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by kmec1990 on
Saturday, 26th December 2015 @ 12:50:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful
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