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sinking
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Friday, 18th December 2015 @ 04:30:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Sinking in the depths of the sea
I wonder if anyone would find me
Slowly gliding under the current
You know how many hours I've spent?
24 to be exact
Its time for me to face the facts
No one is coming to my rescue
There's not even alot, only a few
A few that would come save me
If I asked them to set me free
But all of them are gone now
So how will they save me, just how?
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2015-12-18 16:30:30]
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Re: sinking
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by speedy on
Friday, 18th December 2015 @ 05:08:44 PM AEST
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Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: sinking
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 18th December 2015 @ 05:15:54 PM AEST
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| well, i'm here if you need me... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: sinking
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 24th December 2015 @ 01:13:07 AM AEST
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I know that slow descent
deep inner vision,
hang on........ |
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