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Wishing to breath again
Contributed by
knowWhat_kind
on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I take a deep breath and blink my eyes
Sit in my humble little chair
while they all crowd around me
Talking yelling could they ever stop
Somebody standing behide me kicking my chair
Now scared to death i can't say a word
then a girl i don't like is standing infront of me asking me questions
when i finally work up my courage to speak i answer her questions with a little sqeak
They all stand there a little longer than disappear
Leaving only me and chazlynn sitting there
Thanking God they finally left
Thats a day in art class for me and chaz
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Re: Wishing to breath again
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:45:56 AM AEST
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| sounds like that class really sucks =S |
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Re: Wishing to breath again
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:27:05 PM AEST
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| vivid images, i like how you did this:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Wishing to breath again
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:14:30 PM AEST
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| i hate most of my classes too...GREAT WRITE... |
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Re: Wishing to breath again
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by Broken-glass on
Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 10:42:08 AM AEST
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| Wow I cant stop reading this! A very good idea to descibe your class this way. I know how you feel when the noise is all around you making it hard to concentrate and leaving you feeling isolated. Brilliant write! Please comment on some of mine, I'd love to hear your opinion..... |
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