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All that turned away
Contributed by
knowWhat_kind
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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In my mind tell me what do you see
can you hear my zephyer carrying away my strife
can you find my oblivion disappearing in the night
carry me away to a place without hope and peace and I will die in your arms
If you carry me away with your forgotten hands how will I hold on to our hate
How can you stand there mindless of who I am
Our hope is love our love is peace
so you take this peace and hide it
I live in misery when you stand right beside me go away with all I have given you
You shone it away you shone me away
Your turning into my oblivion and nobody cares
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Re: All that turned away
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 01:54:17 AM AEST
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| wow! this is a powerful poem, i have read it a few times and each time i love it more, i don't know which line hits me hardest, they all are at the same time, excellent poem! ~hugs nessa |
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Re: All that turned away
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 08:01:54 PM AEST
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| OMG Sarah that was soooo good u have no idea...I loved it... |
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