|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
rubberneck
Contributed by
Jigget
on
Friday, 4th December 2015 @ 05:16:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
rubberneck
_______
Watch a friend fiend to self-destruct
dragging that crutch to the crook of the neck
backlash slamdance tracked-in dirt
sideways unbroke stone-cold Wreck
limbs whip quickly, punctuate
prattle and preen; pontificate
pitchfork lipstick half-dead fate
scattered mad savages at the gate
Joshua Howell
12-2015
Copyright ©
Jigget
... [
2015-12-04 05:16:49] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: rubberneck
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Friday, 4th December 2015 @ 11:28:11 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This a powerful write! Thanks for sharing.
ming |
|
|
Re: rubberneck
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Friday, 4th December 2015 @ 02:06:46 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Josh(ua if you prefer to be called as such) would you mind sharing what you see as the meaning here in writing it? I have one, and I would see it as a woman with abandonment issues having a dependency on either an abusive spouse or rapist, who frequently hurt, being left for dead while the spouse or rapist is taken in by a mob and goes to prison. Is that what this is about? |
|
|
Re: rubberneck
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Sunday, 6th December 2015 @ 07:58:04 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very cool
Invierno |
|
|
Re: rubberneck
(User Rating: 1 ) by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 6th December 2015 @ 08:36:27 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well penned
KMEC |
|
|
|