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Open Your Door
Contributed by
JohnnyPoemfingers
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Tuesday, 1st December 2015 @ 05:11:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I think there is something that's making this strange
I don't think it's me, but yet there it remains
I want us to be like we were before
I'm knocking quite hard, just open your door
I'm here for you now and I always will be
you're looking for answers? well find them with me
this poem is cheesy? I dont really care
these feelings are too much for one guy to bear
I need you ,to feel you, so no-one can steal you
I need you to be you, to always be true,
I need you to know that I will always care
and show you I'm feeling these feelings for you
You should really tell me, you told me you would
I promise you now, you will be understood
I hate this not knowing, my heart is exploding
I hope you would tell me, if only you could.
J
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Re: Open Your Door
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st December 2015 @ 08:55:09 PM AEST
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great stanzas, so beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Open Your Door
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd December 2015 @ 12:30:01 AM AEST
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Not cheesy at all. Like Nessa said, "great stanzas."
Welcome to YPDC.
Tim |
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Re: Open Your Door
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 6th December 2015 @ 08:41:22 AM AEST
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I hope the door opens for you, excellent write!
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