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I'm Over You
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 02:41:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I'm so over you
I know what
I must do
I plan to turn
My sad eyes
To a happy shade of blue
With or without you
I shall go on
So be it
I can only lose
When it comes to
Me and you
Not much else to say
So I'll be on my way
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-11-29 02:41:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by FireStarter on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 03:11:43 AM AEST (User
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Love your poem :) |
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 04:02:17 AM AEST (User
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Your eyes look much better a "happy shade of blue!"
You stand so much taller when you can be YOU!
And although it isn't so easy somehow;
(Neither was walking; and look at you now!)
Trust yourself, James.
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 08:24:38 AM AEST (User
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Whammy. I'm going to a happy shade of blue too!
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 08:41:15 AM AEST (User
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Good job...write right on through your sadness James. I value your efforts and support you my friend.
Invierno |
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 09:23:35 AM AEST (User
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beautiful and finite,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Sunday, 29th November 2015 @ 09:33:43 AM AEST (User
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Great write.
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Re: I'm Over You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 06:17:25 AM AEST (User
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//Stick to your guns!!!
I plan to turn
My sad eyes
To a happy shade of blue That`s too cool!
Thank you,
Dugan
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