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You Lied
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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You said you would never hurt me
you lied
you said you loved me
you lied
you are happy now
and to you that is all that matters
you said that you cared
you lied
How can you do this to me
My hurts are to many to count
You said so many things
you lied
I will no longer listin to your lies
And that Alexandre Muise is no lie.
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lil_angel
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2003-05-29 18:05:00]
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Re: You Lied
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 06:36:54 PM AEST
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I've been through this... a couple of times
anyone who does that to you is not worth your friendship or your love.
Good write. :)
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Re: You Lied
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:42:20 PM AEST
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word of the wise... never try to start a relationship over the internet... people take on different personas on the internet and some aren't so nice when they're in person... this poem was written very poorly... i think the poets on this site should start proof reading their works first including myself id recommend mick to make an option to take our poetry off the site to edit... im not saying this to be mean... just trying to improve the quality of the work submitted to the site
-Honest Sid |
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Re: You Lied
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:36:16 PM AEST
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| i had no puncuation to add to it. |
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Re: You Lied
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 04:11:08 PM AEST
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I dont agree with you there, its not the spellings that matters on poetry, its the words, the feelings, the truth that goes into it.
I think this poem is good, i can feel the emotion which strengthens the words |
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Re: You Lied
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by Dr_Prayer_Warrior on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 06:04:57 AM AEST
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| Sory to hear about that. I believe that this is a good poem and is written from the heart. |
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Re: You Lied
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 04:01:00 PM AEST
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Words are cheap less they have true meaning.
The eyes of a person is missing in cyberspace
If that is the mirror to the soul what's to varify?.
Words uttered need have eye contact to assure
their reality. Uness someone is such aa amazing
poet as to be able to have eyes in the words.
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Re: You Lied
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:14:50 AM AEST
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| i could say i been thought this before. it wasnt a lie thought cause hes mom did have it at one point in time but he could how stand up and told me he got it back. |
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