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Death's Overrated
Contributed by
norm
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Hey! all you guys and girls who are wise,
Don't write a poem 'cause somebody dies.
This I have learned from Anabel Lee,
Poe had Lenore to brew all his tea.
Don't write of hell unless they pay cash
To take out an ad for some future bash.
The Inferno of Dante's never made dough,
Dante said things there were slow.
Shakespeare killed kings. He did by the score
And princes and barons and gentry galore,
Their wives and their children he'd often inter
And anyone else, you might well infer.
The point of the story..don't get too gory.
If you don't believe me, ask Peter Lorre.
Pete worked the plot..til it got so hot,
He'd murder a few on a Hollywood lot.
Death as a plot is dull like as not,
The villain gets hisses and smiles a lot,
It's hard to enlighten a writing so crass,
Drop the material and let it just pass.
Copyright ©
norm
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Re: Death's Overrated
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:30:40 PM AEST (User
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this poem is great norm! ~hugs nessa |
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Re: Death's Overrated
(User Rating: 1 ) by falconfemme on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:19:15 PM AEST (User
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I like the rhymes in this and you're write death is a very common subject it gets kind of tiresome, Great work! |
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Re: Death's Overrated
(User Rating: 1 ) by starkindler on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:34:51 PM AEST (User
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Good job! Like it lots, especially since I just finished reading Macbeth for school...Hey, know exactly what you mean! |
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Re: Death's Overrated
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:21:27 PM AEST (User
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It's really very good. Liked the rhyme. Well done! |
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