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the world was and is mad
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 22nd November 2015 @ 12:28:36 PM in AEST
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the first thought
the domino
dark and slippery
almost black
wind pulling
through trees
the low etch
of thunder
the sudden
silk of rain
tipping over
memories
knocks over
knocks over
knocks over
my sharp edges
the storm passes
the past fades
the rain is and was
pouring.
Copyright ©
ming
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2015-11-22 12:28:36]
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Re: the world was and is mad
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd November 2015 @ 04:37:57 PM AEST
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Such finesse! Too cool.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: the world was and is mad
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by speedy on
Monday, 23rd November 2015 @ 05:04:41 PM AEST
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Great write.
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