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Wisdomless Meanings
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Thursday, 19th November 2015 @ 01:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cry out in silence
Fearlessly scared
Searching constantly
For someone who is without care
Not enough risk
To simply dare
To acute to be astute
Blindly peering about
Not knowing what the
Outcome will be without
A lost search
Nowhere to be found
A mind tortured
On the rebound
Wisdomless meanings
They too surround
Hope is without gain
Only time
Still remains
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2015-11-19 13:39:56]
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Re: Wisdomless Meanings
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by softerware on
Friday, 20th November 2015 @ 09:36:06 PM AEST
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I love the disagreement that abounds in your words (as in your thoughts)?
"I cry out in silence"
"Fearlessly scared."
"Blindly peering about."
"Wisdomless meanings."
I thoroughly enjoyed the wonderful push-pull, yes-no, see-saw swing of your dancing rhyme of undefined questioning. Your closure is universal truth: "Only time still remains."
Whew...now that I've caught my breath, let's read this thoroughly splendid and entertaining write again!
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Re: Wisdomless Meanings
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by kmec1990 on
Friday, 20th November 2015 @ 11:27:11 PM AEST
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Excellent write Jim. Time, can be friend or foe too much not enough never seems to be a happy medium. They say time heals all but it's what you have to do to make it pass that is the problem.
Hang in there...
Kris |
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Re: Wisdomless Meanings
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 22nd November 2015 @ 09:58:57 AM AEST
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I'm there with you, brother. Thankfully, we have poetry to explore and work through these plaguing questions that so burden the heart.
I enjoy reading the workings of your mind.
Invierno |
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Re: Wisdomless Meanings
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th March 2016 @ 11:23:03 PM AEST
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A mind tortured
on the rebound.....
loved that line in your flow. |
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Re: Wisdomless Meanings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2020 @ 05:59:50 AM AEST
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//// ((((( Jimmy )))))
"Only time
Still remains"
And with that time we still live, we still learn.
Nicely done abstraction. 👍🏼
Thank you,
Dugan
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