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Not Always Nice
Contributed by
waynster
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Wednesday, 18th November 2015 @ 09:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The perfect world
it is something with me you won’t always see
Where I write about rainbows and butterflies
this mind held in contempt, precious thoughts do not flee
Some say damaged goods
others say loss of innocents may be
Whatever be the case
all of these words are certainly from me
Writing about real life
certain moments of a day
Sometimes trying to release thoughts
a kind of torment that just won’t go away
Every person has their moments
many lock themselves up, not wanting to share
Growing old and wretched
with a wrinkled face and an evil snare
A walk in the forest
or visions of dead with no appeal
A mind is a powerful thing
if you allow it, your sanity it will steal
Sometimes it can’t be helped
our mind controls everything we do
Trying to grasp a happy reality
to write it and share with you
So for the lily pads and flower peddles
with streaks of sunlight shining on morning dew
It’s a pretty picture
I’m just not always able to share that picture with all of you
Read my chicken scratch
let it etch the imagination of whatever realm in which you may be
I will try to touch your heart
subliminal courtship from my words for you to see
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
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waynster
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Re: Not Always Nice
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th November 2015 @ 01:11:19 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful! this is in my opinion one of your best ever written,
you have outdone even yourself!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Not Always Nice
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by thomasu01 on
Thursday, 19th November 2015 @ 06:52:43 AM AEST
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| You are on fire, wonderfully penned. |
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Re: Not Always Nice
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by speedy on
Thursday, 19th November 2015 @ 07:32:49 AM AEST
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Reading this one made me smile.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: Not Always Nice
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by softerware on
Friday, 20th November 2015 @ 09:46:15 PM AEST
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The handsome revelations of a multi-dimensional man! My favorite line is " Growing old and wretched with a wrinkled face and an evil snare" ..sends chills down my bones!
If this be "chicken scratch" I vote for the henhouse!
This is a sincere, revealing, expression of affection for your fellow man, prefaced by an apology for the bitterness of reality that cannot be camouflaged with "lily pads and flower petals".
Fantasy be gone! Write from the heart (as you have), and bestow upon us the very best of you.
Keep the faith with your readers--we are not as fragile as you fear.
softerware
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Re: Not Always Nice
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2016 @ 11:55:56 PM AEST
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| Really great /*****/ here!!! Keepa writin/'/! |
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