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Daybreak...
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Together we lie,within each others warmth
Caressed by the sun as she breaks through the storm
Sands touched with white,glisten and shine
Like the smile that holds me and tells me you're mine
Surrender ourselves to the new light of day
Let our time here together,be whatever it may
Don't dry my tears,for they too have a place
They're the remnants of sorrow,that you have erased
You're all that I feel,consuming my senses
I give you myself,with no colored pretences
Here where the ocean speaks without words
My eyes tell of love,and in sighs they are heard
So kiss me my love,let our lips finally touch
Consume passions fire,with our loving hush
Talk to my body,within me please stray
As we surrender ourselves to the new light of day
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lovingwhispers
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2003-05-29 15:05:00]
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Re: Daybreak...
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 04:41:48 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Daybreak...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:03:32 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful sharon!! ~hugs n' love to you both:) nessa |
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Re: Daybreak...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 07:42:59 PM AEST
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I am speechless...and as you well know, that's quite an accomplishment. :o)
Thank you sweetheart, I will cherish this, and you, forever .
(((((((((((((((((((((((((((sharon))))))))))))))))))))))))) |
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Re: Daybreak...
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:07:27 PM AEST
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Wow just beautiful,Larry should be pleased !
Great write! Christina |
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Re: Daybreak...
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:31:14 AM AEST
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so very lovely!!
Michelle |
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Re: Daybreak...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:25:04 AM AEST
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This is beautiful.
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