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gates of my heart
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 12:19:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You broke the locks on this heart of mine
planned out your entrance, took your time
Broke down the walls of my tortured soul
always said that you'd heal my woes
But it didn't go as you'd hoped
I ended up wounded and alone
Bleeding out as my heart lay cracked
tears strolling down my face, facing the facts
Sheets covered in horrible sorrow
crying out like theres no tomorrow
Thinking of you once again
I need you, my best friend
Picking up my phone once more
I'd had a thought i've never had before
Maybe you'd come back to me
If I let you go and set you free
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2015-11-11 00:19:10]
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Re: gates of my heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 02:22:05 AM AEST
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This poem is seething with the emotion. Powerful writing.
Sorry you're going through this kind of pain.
Keepa writin'!!!
Tim |
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Re: gates of my heart
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by speedy on
Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 07:26:10 AM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: gates of my heart
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 11:26:08 PM AEST
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Nicely done, friend. Keep at it.
Invierno |
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Re: gates of my heart
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by kmec1990 on
Thursday, 12th November 2015 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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Been there too, great write
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Re: gates of my heart
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by thomasu01 on
Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 07:16:32 AM AEST
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Sounds like a married man, sorry, if I am wrong.
I can relate to this from the other side but not as involved.
Well written |
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