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wishing on a star
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 12:44:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Stars twinkling
like diamonds...
above our eyes
Little specks
of glitter...
floating, passing by
We crane
our necks...
to see the show
Shooting stars
flitter...
as they glow
We close our eyes
and wish...
on the stars
I for one
am wishing them gone...
my scars
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FireStarter
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2015-11-09 00:44:42]
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Re: wishing on a star
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 03:46:12 AM AEST
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The ending kinda caught me off guard
still
good poem..... |
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Re: wishing on a star
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 09:20:13 AM AEST
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beautiful- i've had many wishes upon stars that feel the same way...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: wishing on a star
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by speedy on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 08:16:54 PM AEST
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I think we all wish for that sometimes, but scars remind us of where we've been. (I read that somewhere, and I believe it's true.)
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: wishing on a star
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 10th November 2015 @ 11:12:07 AM AEST
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What unknown_utopia wrote..
Nice write!
James |
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