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the power of rain
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 11:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The moment I saw you
rain fell steady,
As the pounding in my heart,
grew ever so loudly.
I stood there smiling
with laughter on my lips,
Trying to catch your eyes
when a lightning bolt went by.
That was my sign,
the moment I knew
That you were for me,
And I for you.
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2015-11-07 23:44:02]
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Re: the power of rain
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 10:41:12 AM AEST
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truly sweet and beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: the power of rain
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 04:32:14 PM AEST
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A bolt meant for you.
Invierno |
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Re: the power of rain
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by speedy on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 08:50:58 PM AEST
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I remember that feeling well. You described it perfectly.
Great write.
Hannah B |
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Re: the power of rain
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 03:50:18 AM AEST
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Destiny flashed before your eyes
thanx for sharing. |
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