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you.
Contributed by
mountainsrisevalleysfall
on
Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 10:21:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sometimes i think about you
the lightning strikes my eyes
your words stabbing my back
the kisses you gave me
i still dream about them
i feel the heat of your touch
i crave you, your warmth
the way my body echoed as you wrapped your arms around you
safe
in control
aware
I miss you
but as the waves comes crashing back
the dark edges of your past scrape at my skin
reminding me of the sharpness
of you
how one second you were there
and the next i was lost in the fog
screaming out your name
but you had moved on
I still miss you
but i wish i didn't.
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mountainsrisevalleysfall
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2015-11-07 22:21:11]
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Re: you.
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 10:35:58 AM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, a lovely write, might want to check that
8th line, i look forward to more,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: you.
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by speedy on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 08:44:11 PM AEST
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Sad, but lovely. Great write.
Hannah B |
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 11:20:46 PM AEST
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Great poem!
James |
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Re: you.
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by FireStarter on
Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 06:53:02 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem! Check 8th line :) |
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