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Understanding Death
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You called me yesterday late at night,
Phone calls I hardly get,
In a soft and sullen voice you said,
Her younger brother is dead.
I was shocked and couldn't say at first,
How could he leave this earth?
Even though I never knew him well,
This news, this silence - it hurt.
To feel death's impact came as a blow,
It's painful sting I've never known,
I can't imagine an ending like this,
Yet it's not our will but His.
So I hung up th phone later that night,
Hoping to continue in sleep,
But I couldnt forget a sister's breaking heart,
Her sorrow, her tears, her grief.
I got up again minutes later,
To write what I am ending,
To pay remember that little boy,
And to gain death's understanding.
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blueheart
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2003-05-29 12:35:00]
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Re: Understanding Death
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:56:32 PM AEST
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| im very sad and sorry to hear this, death always has such an impact on ones life, and with the young it is so very hard to understand... your poem is beautiful, big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:26:32 PM AEST
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| very sad, sorry for your loss.. |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:45:10 AM AEST
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This made the little hairs on my arms stand on end. It is so sad and touching. I am so sorry for your and your friends loss.
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Re: Understanding Death
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 04:33:10 AM AEST
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| Hey, nice poem you've got here and love the way you express your poem. It's a good piece of poetry. |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by Qohinoor on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 04:24:30 AM AEST
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Everything is changeable. At any time, due to the nature of flux, we can lose anyone - our loved ones, our parents, our friends, even our very lives. But death is not the end.
Kamma is released from the physical form it inhabits upon death and will initiate the process of reincarnation again unless that kamma is of purely good kamma. Have no fear. Don't grieve nor pray nor blame any God, but rather learn to honour your dead through good deeds and merit. In that way not only will you enrich yourselves, but you will also respect the names of the fallen. |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by eternal_sorrows on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 02:57:19 AM AEST
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Awesome write! And I understand your words so well for my family died at the same time and death is not only shocking at the time yet, the deepest emotion one left here can feel.
es |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:46:00 AM AEST
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Sad but very good writing.
It's hard understanding death and I'm sure want ever understand it tottaly.
Sorry 'bout the loss.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:00:32 AM AEST
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I feel you on this one...cancer is ravaging someone very close to me as i read this...
well done...your line-to feel deaths empact
came sas a blow-......it flowed right through me
well done. |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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The last verse, third line meant to say
" To remember that little boy "
Sorry, my bad. :) |
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Re: Understanding Death
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by silent on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:13:30 AM AEST
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Death is a very hard thing to take sometimes, especially when it happends to one so young. Very nice writing friend.
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